I was standing in a field
of daisies with the wind blowing my soft brown hair in the wind. I was clothed in a simple white dress that
matched the field of daisies, and it flowed around me as I twirled and laughed
in joy. As I looked up from the
magnificent field of flowers, I saw a girl.
She looked like a younger version of myself, and even had on the same
white dress as me. As I ventured closer
to the young girl, a bloom of crimson appeared on the girl’s chest. It increased in size, expanding until there
was not one spot of white left on the front of the girl’s chest. Right before my eyes, I watched horrific
bruises appear on the girl’s face, arms, and neck. Her once beautiful white dress became ragged
as if a chainsaw were allowed free reign on it.
Her skin had been clearly ripped off or badly burned where the dress had
been torn away. I wanted to avert my
eyes from the ghastly scene, but something kept my eyes locked on the little
girl’s. Her eyes were not open wide in burning
agony, but filled with a fiery hate that could stop a heart. The little girl looked back up at me, right
in the eye, and smiled.
***
I woke from the nightmare
in a cold sweat. My white sheets had
become tangled with my legs, and my body was contorted in an interesting
manner. I was trembling, and tears of
pure fear leaked out of my now fully awake eyes. I was just about to turn on the lamp beside
my bed, when I saw a figure out of the corner of my eye. Someone was standing at the edge of my bed,
watching me. I could feel my hand
trembling as I found the switch to my lamp, and turned it on. The little girl from my nightmare was
standing at my bedside. Time seemed to
slow down as she extended her hand out towards me. Crimson blood dripped from her perfect
porcelain fingers, and splattered onto my white bedspread. It looked as if a small heart lie underneath
my comforter, slowly bleeding its life away.
Then I saw something around her wrist that caught my attention. It was a bracelet, my mother’s bracelet. It had been years since I had seen that
bracelet. Against her bloodied skin, the
shiny silver looked brand new. Suddenly,
my bedroom door was thrown open, and my mother appeared in the doorway. Her face was taunt with fright. “I thought that I heard you call...” she breathed. Her voice died as soon as her
eyes fell upon the little girl standing at my bedside. My mother's eyes widened as she stared at the ragged girl. A thin line of sweat began to trickle down her forehead, and her breathing became rapid. There was something off about her expression, though. I could There was none of the fear that I had first felt at first seeing the horrendous little girl in her expression. Instead, anxiety was etched into her expression. Despite my incessant terror, I forced myself to look at the little girl. She was a younger version of myself, the bloodstains slightly concealing a birthmark on her cheek that has been known to run in our family. Then there was my mother's bracelet. Its alluring shine heavily contrasted with the girl's bloodstained dress. "Mom?" I asked, "What is going?" The little girl smiled.
Ooooooh...the lack of resolution at the end leaves us guessing! I like the word "bloom" to describe the blood seeping into the white and the line "It looked as if a small heart lie underneath my comforter, bleeding its life away." Creepy.
ReplyDeleteChilling! This story kept my stomach in a knot and kept me reading. Fantastic.
ReplyDeleteChilling! This story kept my stomach in a knot and kept me reading. Fantastic.
ReplyDeleteI love the similes you use in this story! "Her once beautiful white dress became ragged as if a chainsaw were allowed free reign on it" really created great imagery, too. I like how her dream turns into reality at the end. It really added suspense and horror. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI have so many questions, and this story certainly seems to have more to tell! Why did the mom seem to already recognize the little girl? Did something happen to her daughter a long time ago? Why does the creepy version of the girl have her mom's bracelet? The use of imagery was really, really good. You really illustrated how grotesque and nightmarish the kid was. I almost think the mom made some kind of deal with the devil from her reaction.
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