
Her
bright blue eyes gleamed with indifference as she was roughly
dragged by the arms to the shimmering blue lake.
She did not kick nor scream as a bald, heavyset man untied a rope from
her mouth. She simply gazed at the clear, cloudless sky, and cleared her mind of her impending
fate. As the man continued to drag her
towards the lake,
veins popping
out with effort, the girl
imagined herself elsewhere. She imagined
that was swimming with her family in the neighborhood pool, and laughing
as her father pushed her little sister in the cool water. Her memory was cut short when she felt her
feet hit the rough wooden boards of the lake’s dock.
As she looked around the foaming white lake, she
caught her last glimpses of beauty. On
the lakebed were pale rocks,
seemingly untouched by human hands in their perfection. Next to the weathered rocks was a dogwood
tree with flowers blooming on each branch.
The pure flowers gently whispered in the wind, causing
petals to fall off the tree and into the lake.
The tiny petals broke the water’s surface, causing ripples to flow out in every direction. As they approached the end of the dock, she
dimly became aware of how bright it was outside. The sun shone down, breaking up any lasting clouds; it was a spotlight on her execution.
When they finally approached the
edge of the dock, the man’s devilish
black eyes gleamed as he stared down
at her with hate. From a bag slung over his shoulder, the bald
man pulled out a pair of handcuffs. His
smile was menacing as he replaced
the rope that bound her wrists together with the gleaming iron cuffs. When
the handcuffs were locked in place, the same process was repeated to her
ankles- forever binding them together.
To the girl’s horror and her executioner’s glee, she saw him
expertly tie three lengths of rope around the width of a cinderblock found at
the edge of the dock. It looked as if it
had been previously placed there; her execution
was planned. The girl shut her eyes, blocking out the sunlight, and pictured
her slow demise. She would attempt to hold her breath out of
the desire to survive before a raw panic would completely overtake her. Her body would thrash like a dead fish in a vain effort to swim, and then go slack
as she began to drown. Memories would
flash before her dimming mind, which would prevent her from staring around at
her inky grave. Ever so slowly, her thoughts would fade into nothingness, and there would be no more light.
The girl’s eyes snapped open at the
sound of the man’s feet rushing off, and she saw a blazing red fire. The flames were coming
from the forest near the lake, and quickly spreading to the trees near the lakebed. A sudden swell of anger built
up inside of her as she realized that the last sight she would see would be of
the flames eating
away at the gentle dogwood tree. She also realized that her captor had left
her here to die, and ran off to save himself from the approaching flames. Just as she thought that all hope was lost,
she saw a man racing towards her. She recognized
him. It was Darwin… Suddenly, there was a roar of
thunder, and a flash of lightning lit up the interior of the house. I thought that I heard my little sister scream
bloody murder from
upstairs; for, she was terrified of thunderstorms. As I glanced back at the television to see
how Darwin would save his lover from a fiery death, I noticed that the television had been turned
into static due to the lightning. I
grumbled with distaste at the hazardous conditions outside, wanting to ease
back into a lovely night on the couch with my soft velvet blanket
and an episode of Dangerous Lives. I would just have to watch tomorrow’s episode
to see if Darwin’s love escapes, or if the inferno will be her
last glimpse of beauty.
What an interesting, cozy twist there at the end to move the scene from the dock to a night in front of the TV! Those first two paragraphs are especially strong narration, with lots of vivid imagery..sights, sounds, textures...Nice work, Meghan.
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