Thursday, September 3, 2015

Enchanted Glow




As I gazed up at the night-darkened sky from my bedroom window, my eyes fell upon the stars.  They were lovely, the stars, with their enchanting glow.  The soft light from the captivating constellations held my attention for minutes on end.  As my eyes drunk in each twinkling light from up above, my mind was busy wandering.  My thoughts traveled far and wide:  from my hopes and dreams, to what it would be like to travel the stars (and the world), and what I was going to have for breakfast in the morning.  My thoughts were interrupted by my mom, who was yelling at me to get to bed.  I simply sighed, and closed my curtain for the night.  The stars would wait; they would be there again tomorrow for me to gaze upon.  Tomorrow, I could again confide in the stars with each silly little thought, my aspirations, and my hunger to understand all of my surroundings.  Tomorrow, the stars would again be my fixed point of hope and beauty.  As I climbed into bed and turned off my bedside lamp, I smiled as I situated myself on my back, so I was looking up at the ceiling.  On the ceiling was the enchanting glow of stars.

3 comments:

  1. I like the lines about the stars being a confidant and also the "fixed point of hope and beauty." Thanks, Meghan!

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  2. Hi Meghan! I thought it was awesome how she went to bed and she had stars on her ceiling. That was really impressive. I wonder how she accomplished it.
    Have a lovely night,
    Zachary

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  3. Beautiful, I want to go star-gazing with you! You take the simplicity of this moment and it's beauty and illustrate it well in this piece. I like how the narrator's mind wanders while she's watching the stars.

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